Alma writing week 6 term 3

Hello everyone, today im blogging about my writing for this week. I hope that you like it!

Question: Have you ever seen the short film Alma?

 Alma

Chunk 9

Simile

Adverb

Rhetorical question

By Eilish

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 The imprisoned children were trapped on the shelf . A red haired doll squivils up on a velvet red chair.  She has sapphire blue eyes and a red floral dress as red as a ruby. The miniature doll stood quietly on the stool ,  could you be next?

Cyber smart - Comix with Natalia

 Cyber smart - Comix  with Natalia
Hello everyone! so for cyber smart today I made a comix with Natalia.
It was about the and bad kinds of comments, I hope you enjoy!
Question: Have you ever made a comix before?

P.S I dont know how to put the auctual comix on the blog, SORRY!

Lost and found

Hello again! So for writing this week we wrote about a sad story called lost and found. I was chunk 2 which was when the sadness started. Here is the bit I wrote, Enjoy!

Action

Alliteration

Inner thought

Eilish

Characters:

Fifi ( Fox )

Deano ( Dinosaur )

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Fifi’s fox tail hovered above the glistening water. Suddenly, the bamboo tube splashed Fifi’s tail heavily with water and Fifi got pulled into the barrel of water. Fifi was frightened and floundering in the water that was too deep for her. Deano gasped loudly as he saw his best friend sink into the deep barrel. Fifi was drowning in pain, She managed to grab a hold of the edge of the barrel and coughed loudly. Deano could see that she was struggling to hold on , Deno quickly swooped out of his box to save his best friend. Deano thought “I can do this, my best friend is in danger and I need to save her. ” He scurried quickly and zoomed to the edge of the table ready to leap in to save his best friend.