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Wednesday, August 26, 2020

Alma writing week 6 term 3

Hello everyone, today im blogging about my writing for this week. I hope that you like it!
Question: Have you ever seen the short film Alma?

 Alma
Chunk 9
Simile
Adverb
Rhetorical question
By Eilish
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 The imprisoned children were trapped on the shelf . A red haired doll squivils up on a velvet red chair.  She has sapphire blue eyes and a red floral dress as red as a ruby. The miniature doll stood quietly on the stool ,  could you be next?
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2 comments:

  1. AnonymousSeptember 11, 2020 at 9:41 AM

    Hi Eilish, I love your story. I like how you added a question at the end of your chunk and I also love your similie. Maybe next time you could write a little more but apart from that is was a lovely chunk!!!!!
    -Lucy

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  2. AnonymousSeptember 11, 2020 at 9:42 AM

    Hello Eilish this story is very interesting and it is very very cool like u. Do you think you'll be next? XD

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